THANK YOU FOR READING!I hope you enjoyed The Tindoria Chronicles: Shadows of Phoenix.Please share your thoughts below; I am not afraid of criticism! Name * First Name Last Name FIRST IMPRESSIONS Did the first 10 pages make you want to keep reading? Yes No If not, what is the problem? Did you find yourself skipping pages? Yes No Were you confused at any point in the story? Yes No If yes, what confused you? CHARACTERS Who is your favorite character and why? Are any of the characters underdeveloped, fleshed out or lacking? Please explain. Could you relate to the characters? How? Were the characters believable? Yes No Are there any characters you think could be made more interesting or more likable? Could you tell the characters apart? Were there too many characters to keep track of? Are any of the names of characters too similar? Did the dialogue keep your interest and sound natural to you? If not, whose dialogue did you think sounded artificial or not like that person would speak? Which parts of the story resonated with you? PLOT Did you feel the plot moved at a logical and understandable pace? Yes No Did any parts feel rushed? Did any parts drag? Yes No If yes, please explain Is the book ... Too Long Too Short Just Right Were there any boring or unnecessary parts? Please explain. Was there enough conflict, tension, and intrigue to keep your interest? Yes No What is your favorite part of the book and why? What is your least favorite part of the book and why? Was there anything that surprised you? Did you find satisfaction in the ending? Yes No Did anything seem implausible to you? GENRE Did you know what genre you read? Yes No Does this story remind you of anything you’ve read/watched before? Does this book make you feel what other books in this genre do? Yes No Do you think the target audience for this genre will enjoy this book? Why or why not? Would you recommend it to fans of this genre? Yes No How would you describe this book to a fellow reader of the genre? What other books in this genre best describe it? (“Like Hunger Games meets Dune.”) WRITING Did you feel there was too much description or exposition? Not enough? Maybe too much dialogue in parts? Do you think the writing style suits the genre? If not, why not? Did the grammar, punctuation, sentences, or prose help or hinder your reading of the book? Helped Hindered Have you noticed any inconsistencies or discrepancies in the sequence of events, locations, character names, or other elements? Does the book have a good sense of place and immerse the reader in sensory details? Yes No How was the writing voice of the book? Was it distinctive? Was it authoritative? What is your opinion on the quality of the book’s writing? Are there any questions you still have about the book? Would you read another book by this author? Yes No I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU THOUGHT! I'd love to gift you a physical copy of Shadows of Phoenix as a thank you! Yes please! No thank you I would love to thank you by name in SoP's acknowledgements Yes, please! No, thank you Email Thank you so much for your valuable feedback!
