Beta Reader Sign Up for The Tindoria Chronicles: Shadows of Phoenix

Thank you for expressing interest in being a Beta Reader! This allows you to give feedback on Shadows of Phoenix and provide insight on story improvements. If you’re selected, you’ll be granted access to a group Google Doc where you can interact and leave comments/feedback/critiques/reactions as you see fit! Upon notifying me you finished the book, you will be emailed a questionnaire of 10 questions in 4 categories: characters, plot, genre, and writing.

Things to Know About Shadows of Phoenix

  • Shadows of Phoenix is book 3 of the trilogy

  • Shadows of Phoenix is ~80,000 words

  • the story is written in third person omniscient point of view, simple past tense

  • the story’s genre is YA with an age category of 13+

  • portal fantasy with magical elements and powers (no witchcraft, no explicit spells, mild ambiguous black magic used by bad guys)

  • clean romance (no explicit sensuality, smut, spice, or sex)

  • some descriptive fantasy violence, a PG-13 amount of blood, and some undead/gore elements

  • no foul language or profanities

  • this is not a romance book: the adventure and quest take the helm of the main story, and any romance is a subplot.

  • death and grief are featured

    Book Synopsis (to be finalized)

    The Spire’s Scroll has spoken, and the clock counts down to death.

    A team aboard the Horizon’s Signal embarks on a terrifying voyage to the unknown to rescue Melanie from the realm of death. When the spawn of all evil itself is revealed, Melanie and Scalaed come face to face with who they truly are. The Waldens siblings must accept redemption is for everyone, Kyle receives haunting visions, and Scalaed battles demons of his own. All the while Melanie hides a fatal secret.

    Klarn can almost taste the life of Tindoria. After so many years, his mission is nearly accomplished. With the help of the lord of Merrendogith himself, escape is finally at hand. What could possibly go wrong? After all, his mysterious ally appears to be helping the Kottrans.

    Melanie, Jason, and Kyle must push their powers to their full potential, or the enemy will wipeout mankind from the face of the world. Even with the Celestials’ aid and a team of fortuitous allies, the final battle approaches…and it calls for death.

Thank You for Your Interest!

If while reading the book you decide it’s not for you, please don’t feel pressured to finish the read. Not every book is for everyone, and that’s okay! I just request you contact me to let me know so I don’t worry you dropped off the face of the earth! Also, if possible, explain why you didn’t finish. I’m always available to chat and will completely understand.

If you’re interested, please fill out the form below! :)

If chosen, you will receive Google Doc access July 22, 2025.

NOTE: by submitting this form you agree to submit feedback within 6 weeks of receiving the manuscript.